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Five readers walked the new store from the front page to the till. Four of them stopped at the same place.

The last panel ended by saying what it could not do: a panel is a weaker instrument than a journey, and nobody arrives at a store having read four versions of its front page. This is the journey. The same five readers, written on 15 September and carried across unchanged, each walked the store the way a buyer would, at 1280 and at 390. Four of the five reached the checkout and stopped at the same place, for the same reason, and it is not a design problem.

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P-1 — Give the checkout somewhere to go when the till is shut

I have a £550 order, a reference, and a button that tells me why it does not work. Now what?

A named way to reach a person, on the checkout page, for a reader who has built an order and cannot pay for it. Not a form — there is none on this domain and there will not be — an address, and the order reference beside it so the first message already says what they wanted.

It is blocked on a decision, not on code. CL-1 is name the owner of the follow-up mailbox and it has been open since the post-sale pages were built. The checkout is the second page that needs the answer.

Four of five readers asked for this in their own words, and it is the only finding in this review that costs a buyer something today rather than costing them attention.

P-2 — Move the evidence band above the four levels

This is the section that would make me take a call, and I found it because I scroll to the bottom of everything. Most people do not.

Six published vaults, open to read without paying anything, currently begin at 3,098 pixels of a 4,395-pixel page — 3.4 screens down at 1280, and 7.9 screens down at 390, where the page is 9,406 pixels tall.

Two panels have now named this band as the thing that decides them, and both times it was the readers with the largest budgets. On 16 September it was the reason the live page beat three concepts that had deleted it; a build check put it back on the new front page the day that page became the store.

Put it directly under the four facts and above the four levels. A reader who has seen six real documents before seeing a price reads the price differently.

P-3 — Collapse the filter bar on a phone

I scrolled past a screen and a half of ways to narrow fifteen things before I saw one of them.

521 pixels of filter bar, eighteen chips, and the first policy card at 1,220 pixels on an 844-pixel viewport. Eight of the eleven category chips have a count of one.

On a phone, collapse the whole bar behind one control that says how many shapes are showing, the way the behaviour menu already collapses. The cards come up to the top of the page and the filters are one tap away.

The category chips could also be fewer. Eleven families is what the promoted catalogue publishes and the labels are ours; a chip that filters fifteen things down to one is a link to that thing wearing a filter's clothes.

P-4 — Decide what search does on a phone

It told me to type. I am holding a phone.

The search on the picker has no field, because this site has none anywhere and the rule is not moving for a filter box. What it has instead is the keyboard: press /, type, and the list narrows. On a phone with no hardware keyboard that is nothing at all, and the dialog says so and points at the chips.

The design handback solved this with an on-screen keyboard drawn out of buttons. That was refused when the picker was built — twenty-six buttons to filter fifteen things is worse than the fifteen things — and the refusal is still defensible at fifteen. It stops being defensible at fifty.

The ruling is not about search, it is about the catalogue's size. If the fifteen shapes become fifty, the phone needs a way to type; if they do not, the chips are the filter and the search chip should not appear on a touch device at all.

P-5 — Give the capability strip something to say, or take it out

It says the cells are counted and not classified, which is the right answer and also means the strip is showing me one number I already read in the tile above it.

The strip draws one uncoloured cell per capability in a grant. It was coloured until the day the supporting pages were built, when five of the fifteen shapes turned out not to have totals that partition their own grant; colouring it was drawing a split the published data does not contain.

Uncoloured, it repeats the first stat tile. Priya is right. It is a bar chart of one number, next to the number.

It turns back on the moment the per-shape capability join is published — TK-14, upstream. Until then the honest choices are to keep it as a sense of scale or to remove it, and keeping it costs a reader a second of confusion rather than misleading them.

P-6 — Say what happens when the named person cannot take the work

One name, and I am buying their calendar. What if they are busy for six weeks?

Two of the four levels are one person's time and the page says so, names them, and reads every line of the record off a published page. Ines went there first and read it closely, which is what it is for.

What it does not say is what happens if that person is unavailable. The delivery estimates are from your reply and depend on a calendar; the page explains why, and stops there.

This is already on the board twice — WD-4 recruits the rest and WD-5 says what happens when the chosen reviewer cannot take the work — and WD-5 is blocked on WD-3, which is blocked on a second name. It does not need to be. The answer for one name is a sentence, and not having it is what makes a reader at £1,500 hesitate.

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